In need of some feedback

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Hey guys. How are you all doing?

I've been doing fine lately. Working on commissions, attending school, living life... Hopefully I can deliver something by the end of the week.

Anyways, I'm making this journal because I need your help. You see, I'm having some issues with my art, every time I see it I'm kind of proud but at the same time embarrassed. I can see that I have made a lot of progress with my skills, but I can't stop feeling uncomfortable while seeing it and feeling that I made a lot of stuff wrong. Sometimes I feel like there's something bugging me, but I don't know what it is, I don't know if it's the hair, the expressions, the lineart, the shading... I don't know...

I need your help on telling me what to improve, look at my pics and tell me what could use some work. As I said before, I look at them I know something's wrong but I don't know what's wrong.

If you could give me some tips on how to improve my lineart and shading that would be great, I use Sai for everything and I have Photoshop but I don't know how to implement it into my art. 

Thank you for your time and have a nice day.
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TicklingOscars's avatar
Well, what can I say. In general your pics are quite well done for the time that you have been posting. Sometimes you make mistakes with a shade or a weird bend bone. But not really big things. In your last two pic, youve draw really small toes, so the feet dont look nice at all. In the last one the big toes have a weird shape, those dont look like toes, and the ticklers hand pose is hard to figure.

Im not saying this to desmotivate you, im saying this to help you improve. I make a lot of mistakes myself, and I try to learn from them. Thats why im quite a critic with myself.

I really thing you have a lot of potential. If I have learn something about drawing and coloring is that the best way to learn is watching others and experimenting yourself. Im looking forward to see how it goes for you!